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Our love was virile,
It held on through
The terrifying act
We were about to do
To save our love
What we had to do
Would hurt them deeply
But our love was true
They didn’t approve
Of our binding revere
Which burned much deeper
Than theirs could persevere
They wouldn’t allow
Us to be
The only way to escape
Was to set ourselves free
Into my eyes
He looked so deep
We both knew
We had to leap
To save our love
Our hands held fast
As we turned together
And breathed our last
To save our love
We chose our fate
And traveled together
To that sacred gate
It held on through
The terrifying act
We were about to do
To save our love
What we had to do
Would hurt them deeply
But our love was true
They didn’t approve
Of our binding revere
Which burned much deeper
Than theirs could persevere
They wouldn’t allow
Us to be
The only way to escape
Was to set ourselves free
Into my eyes
He looked so deep
We both knew
We had to leap
To save our love
Our hands held fast
As we turned together
And breathed our last
To save our love
We chose our fate
And traveled together
To that sacred gate
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Proof that I should never write poetry. My mind has been on love and stuff ever since I read the Twilight series again. Blah, good going Stephenie Meyer.
Also, I toyed around a lot with the placement of the "paragraphs" (can't think of the poetical term for them right now). So it can really be read several ways.
Do not steal (though I don't know why you would). This poem is copyright to me!
(c) November 2008
Also, I toyed around a lot with the placement of the "paragraphs" (can't think of the poetical term for them right now). So it can really be read several ways.
Do not steal (though I don't know why you would). This poem is copyright to me!
(c) November 2008
© 2008 - 2024 SilmeHeryn
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that's actually quite good for someone who doesn't write poetry. o:
annd. you're looking for the word *stanza
annd. you're looking for the word *stanza